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"Loose Threads" or "Go and read!"

  Thanks much to fallenpegasus for getting the scripting working.

Any comments, criticisms...all I can say is, hey...24 hours. 

As I said before...this is a sequel to Puzzles and takes place approximately a year and a half later.  If you don't remember the events of Puzzles...you can always reread it...or better yet, buy " 24 Hour Comics Day Highlights 2005"!

















(Mom...you may not want to read these on your computer.)

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pvenables
Oct. 11th, 2006 08:55 pm (UTC)
Nice work! Kinda sad but an interesting read. I think it's a lot more coherent than some 24 hr comics I've read.

Your action scenes are fantastic, by the way.
jatg
Oct. 11th, 2006 09:14 pm (UTC)
Thanks. As I said...upon the reread I wish I had let things build more...start the emotional arc much more upbeat and then let it get darker and ratchet the tension.

Also, thanks for the action sequence kudos. I was kind of disappointed with the slug shot... it was 4 am by that point...so I'm glad you like it. :)

It is sadder. This pleases me. ;)
new_iconoclast
Oct. 11th, 2006 09:31 pm (UTC)
As I'm going back and reading the earlier one to make sure I have the "back story" right, I noted LJ's T-shirt and thought I'd better make sure you have the link to this.
jatg
Oct. 11th, 2006 09:35 pm (UTC)
Hee hee... I did see that. Verra cool! I'm wondering if part II is building your own lantern for the ring!

I opted to change LJ's shirt this time around. Last time there was some worry about copyright infringements. Heh.
tiwonge
Oct. 11th, 2006 10:18 pm (UTC)
If Frazz (from Frazz) and Rob (from Get Fuzzy) can wear logos and copyrighted slogans and stuff, I don't know why LJ can't.
new_iconoclast
Oct. 11th, 2006 09:44 pm (UTC)
(Done with both now)
Wow. Just - well, wow.

Very nicely done.
tiwonge
Oct. 11th, 2006 10:18 pm (UTC)
It ended kind of unexpectedly. At least, I was expecting another page or two.
kimnrowdy
Oct. 12th, 2006 03:30 am (UTC)
You totally win for page 21. That's awesome.
redsbird
Oct. 12th, 2006 07:00 pm (UTC)
AWESOME! I gotta go back and look at the art a little better. I read it one time through for the story. Nice SiP reference :-)
Well done, Jett.
elanswer
Oct. 13th, 2006 05:55 am (UTC)
Cool! Awesome work! Thank you!
deronimo
Oct. 13th, 2006 05:56 am (UTC)
I am SO obtuse!!
I completely didn't get the thing with LJ and Jules until I read Loose Threads and then went back and looked at Puzzles. I'm so dumb. Haha now the plot makes so much more sense.

It's very well done! I missed the humor but it's true to the comic. Thanks, Jett!!
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