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"Jeff" or "2008 24 Hour Comic"

It's up! Thanks to fallenpegasus for the scripting work!

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I'll be curious to know what you think!

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pvenables
Oct. 21st, 2008 04:28 am (UTC)
Well done. The art kicks ass and the story is very well laid out and told. The message seems pretty heavy-handed to my eyes.. did you intend this to be such a political tale or did the meaning emerge after you had written it?
jatg
Oct. 21st, 2008 04:31 am (UTC)
I had some themes in mind from a dream I had had the night before. I admit it gets heavy handed at the end but boy, someday I'll tell you about the alternate ending I had in mind.

I wanted to do an alternate view than all of the "yay for community" and "it takes a village" stories out there. Think of this as my rebuttal to "Ant Bully" or something ;)
pvenables
Oct. 21st, 2008 04:34 am (UTC)
Well you did a darn fine job all the same. Good on ya!
hearts_treasure
Oct. 21st, 2008 04:48 am (UTC)
I like it!
A mix between ugly duckling and the camel putting his nose in the tent.
Such a strong ending.
jatg
Oct. 21st, 2008 06:26 am (UTC)
Huh...I didn't think about either of those stories as I was working on it but I can see the themes reflected. Thanks!
buddygirl10
Oct. 21st, 2008 02:48 pm (UTC)
Wonderful!
Beautiful work Jett!
I love your "awkward phase" chicks. And the running aliens gag. I'd love to see an anthology of your 24hr comics in print one day.
Now, how about some red-sparrow? :D
redsbird
Oct. 21st, 2008 03:11 pm (UTC)
Fantastic! I'll have to go back a second time to pick up the subtleties, but I like the story and the and initial view of your art.
Well done!
cynnyr
Oct. 21st, 2008 04:22 pm (UTC)
Love it!
rustingwillpowr
Oct. 21st, 2008 11:42 pm (UTC)
*thumbs up* Very, very nice! I like the art and story. The layouts were great, and it was a page-turner for sure.

The next to the last page made me think of Wicked...(like when Elphaba tells Nessa goodbye), so on the last page where Jeff's flying off into the sunset I hear "Defying Gravity" playing in my head.
wurtmann
Oct. 22nd, 2008 12:40 pm (UTC)
Thumbs up!!
I like this year's production. The story also gives much food for thought.
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